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The stereotype is that, sexually, men are more visual while women are more into story and fantasy. What do you think? 

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1 deviant said I don't really know. Just show me the results
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No deviants said Definitely true. Men are visual and women are not. Men want pictures. Women want stories.
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No deviants said It's an exaggeration. Men are somewhat more visual, but some women like pictures and some men like stories
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No deviants said The stereotype is completely false. Some men prefer stories and some women prefer pictures. There's no specific pattern.
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No deviants said The stereotype has it wrong. Women like pictures more than men.
After, once again, posting a story to Utopiastories (where there is no edit capability), I'm appalled at the number of typos that have slipped by. I've tried letting stories sit and various other techniques and my rate of error catching has improved. Nevertheless, I still suck at proofreading my own stuff.

I have pestered people into proofreading in the past, but I don't like to do that. A few people have offered here and there, but my inbox is largely a train wreck so I've lost track. As a result, I'm trying a new approach and asking for volunteers.

If you are interested in occasional proofreading of my stuff, leave me a comment or drop me a note to that effect. I will thank anyone involved when I post the story, so if you aren't into that, just let me know and you can become a stealthy ninja proofreader instead.

My plan is to rotate among any volunteers so as not to drive anyone particularly nuts. With my relatively low output, I don't think keeping up with me will be much of a problem anyways.  When I have something far enough along, I will send out one of those private stash link so this is all done right here on dA. Essentially proofreaders will see earlier drafts of what I'm working on--so they must be sworn to secrecy.

I want to emphasize that this is proofreading and not editing. I don't really want suggestions about how to change the story itself (aside from continuity issues and things like that). I have a tendency to second guess myself already, so editing suggestions might mess with my perverted, quirky mind.

Oh, and if anyone ever finds a typo or mistake in one of my stories, please note me about it.  They really do drive me nuts.
I  was mulling over this story and how I've never been completely happy with it. It keeps bugging me.  I have some ideas about how I might "rescue" it.  In the meantime, I moved it to my scraps folder.

I've got some other projects to get out of the way first, but if you have some thoughts on changes, think I should just can this story altogether, or if you want to tell me I'm crazy (especially) and the story is fine, please drop me some comments. Thanks.

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Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
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New Jersey

Writing erotic fiction to embrace my passions and satisfy my soul.

I love comments/notes/e-mails (it's the only feedback and motivation I get) and invite constructive criticism.

If you find any typos or grammar errors in my work, please note me. I seek total eradication.

I'd love to hear from anyone interested in creating illustrations or visual art related to one of my stories, note me! I don't like to ask because most artists are pretty busy already.

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The stereotype is that, sexually, men are more visual while women are more into story and fantasy. What do you think?
100%
1 deviant said I don't really know. Just show me the results
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No deviants said Definitely true. Men are visual and women are not. Men want pictures. Women want stories.
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No deviants said It's an exaggeration. Men are somewhat more visual, but some women like pictures and some men like stories
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No deviants said The stereotype is completely false. Some men prefer stories and some women prefer pictures. There's no specific pattern.
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No deviants said The stereotype has it wrong. Women like pictures more than men.

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darkstalker1 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for adding 'Milking The Moment' to your collection :happybounce: 
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neglected2much Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. You have lots of intriguing stuff in your gallery. The quality of work looks consistently high. I have to take some time and go through it looking for items that match my particular tastes.
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darkstalker1 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
By all means take your time going through my gallery. I'm sure you'll find some more pieces to your liking.
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Mr-Timeshadow Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Thanks for the watch!
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darkstalker1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for adding me to your WATCH list :happybounce: 
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heveti Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for watching and the favs :-)
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Egoak Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for keeping an :eye: on me and for the :+fav:s I really appreciate it :excited:
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neglected2much Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, definitely
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Blades-123 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:' I hope you enjoy my gallery
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neglected2much Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You have some really exceptional works. Lots of people can create great looking characters and have the skillset (wish I was one of them, alas), but you go beyond that and create scenes that intrigue the mind as well. That's what real art is to me. 
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